Edwin's Reviews:

Enemies With In - by Kevin Chalmers   (POEM REVIEW) #1

The poem of "ENEMIES WITH IN" is giving me the understanding that the author sees himself s an enemy out in the public world. He continuous gives examples of how he feels in the world and what he sees and observes. He also seems disturbed in some ways as people pass him and ignore him. The way the poem is written sounds as if in a dream but based on what the title says I'm guessing  had to do with something internally whether its what he feels or thinks.
All in all this is a well written out poem, not the best I've seen but a good poem yes! I'd give it 6 out of 10.

You Own Worst Enemy - by David. Whalen  (POEM REVIEW) #2

This Poem, "YOUR OWN WORST ENEMY" based on my understanding is truley on how you, yourself can be your own enemy. Other people don't just have to be your enemy if "A more common enemy (yourself) lives much much near." Basically I get the image that no one should really have foes, if you have people you love and care about around you, but you should be aware that just because you thing you don't have enemies doesn't really mean you don't because in the end you may see yourself as an enemy.
I think this poem is well written and actually makes sense if you think bout it because sometimes people are to hard on them selves and start to hate them selves, because they have created their own self enemy. Nothing good comes ot of hate so I like the way that the poem explains that as long as loved ones are around you and with you, there is no need of enemies, because its sort of true.
Out of a 10 range scale I'd give this one a 8 or 9 out of 10.